We did some shared reading, we read 'Camouflage' and later wrote a piece about colour and described what it reminds us of.
Everyone enjoyed themselves and wrote amazing descriptions!
Friday, June 7, 2019
Last writing session with Mrs Butler
Feu'u class was really lucky to have a writing workshop with Mrs Butler. It was her last session with Hay Park primary school.
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DeleteKia ora Feu'u class,
DeleteIt is me Gaylene from Willams class.I really enjoyed your descriptive writing. I loved Keti because she had a few adjectives in her descriptive writing.
You brought me back to when I was 5 or 6 when I used to eat all the berries and then get in to trouble.I loved how Barney explained to us what it reminds him about the lemon.
I would like to hear more about your descriptive writing and I enjoyed reading it
KIA Ora Feu´u class,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you said yellow reminds me of.... then you said red reminds me of.... and I like how you put in good words but I have one question why did you put 3 red reminds me of.... bye guys.
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Kia ora Feu'u class,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you explained all the different types of ways that colours reminded you of . These pieces of writing was so good I wanted to hear some more and more.But maybe you could put some more descriptive writing on different colours.
From Rigg
Hi Hay Park school. I like how the colours some of those colours remind me of
ReplyDeletegood times with my family. Why you did it at the time.
Hi its lanisi everybody did a great job colouring in there feathers.
ReplyDeleteHey,my name is salote we all appreciate your comment Raffaele
ReplyDeleteHi it's Emrico and thank you Raffele for the brilliant Comment that you made.
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ReplyDeleteHi feuu class
ReplyDeleteit looks like you have being writing some storys about red blue and yellow wow a lot of colours